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题目解析 y 本题为双图地图题,描绘的是一个岛屿上旅游设施建设前后的不同情形。 y 通过对比前后图及图上的文字示意,我们可以初步看出有可能需要写到的细节包括: accommodation – 住宿; restaurant – 餐厅; reception – 接待; pier – 码头; beach & swimming – 海滩和游泳; footpath – 人行道; vehicle track – 机动车道; y 图中并没有给出方向,但为了描述清楚,可以假设上北下南的方位; y 写地图题时需要注意时态,如本题,改造前可以使用过去时而改造完后即现在则可以使 用一般现在时; 写作思路 对于对比类的地图题,我们可以选用的写作结构大概有两种: 1. 分类描写:适用于有两种以上变化形式的地图。例如部分物体增加,部分物体减少,部 分物体没有变化,则可分别描写; 2. 分图描写:分别描述两张地图,然后再最后一段总结变化。该文中范文用的便是这种手 法。 范文解析 以下是剑 9 提供的考生的 7 分范文,原文与具体解析如下:
The two maps show the same island while first one is before and the second one is after the construction for tourism.
第一段:简述地图内容,转述题目。
Looking first at the one before construction, we can see a huge island with a beach in the west. The total length of the island is approximately 250 metres.
第二段:简单描述第一幅地图。因为第一幅地图并无太多具体信息,因此描述得较为简略, 但大意已经清楚。
Moving on to the second map, we can see that there are lots of buildings on the island. There are two areas of accommodation. One is in the west near the beach while the other one is in the centre of the island. Between them, there is a restaurant in the north and a central reception block, which is surrounded by a vehicle track. This track also goes down to the pier where people can go sailing in the south sea of the island. Furthermore, tourists can swim near the beach in the west. A footpath connecting the western accommodation units also leads to the beach.
第三段:分别描述了第二幅地图,即建筑改造后的地图的各项变化。在描述地图题时,必须 正确地使用地理方位的词以及表示方位的介词才能保证段落的连贯性,如此段中的 in the west 及 between them 等。
Overall, comparing the two maps, there are significant changes after this development. Not only lots of facilities are built on the island, but also the sea is used for activities. The new island has become a good place for tourism.
第四段:对比两张地图的不同,同样因为第一张地图内容较少,因此可以比较的内容页较为 有限。 地图题必备句式 1. 表方位 A 在 B 的东方/西方/南方/北方 A is/ lies/ is located/ is situated in/on / to the east/west/south/north of B (in 表 A 在 B 内部, on 表 A 和 B 接壤,to 表 A 和 B 分开)
A 在 B 内部的某个部位 A is in the eastern/ southern/ western/ northern part of B.
A 在 B 西北部的 120 千米处 A lies 120 km to the northwest of B.
A 在 B…..角落 A is at/in the south-eastern corner of B ( at 表示 A 在 B 外部, in 表 A 在 B 内 部)
在河流或道路的南边/北边等 On the south/southern side of the river On both sides of the road On the other side
临近马路的地区 The area adjacent to/ near /next to/ just off the road
在道路或河流的最南端 At the southern end of the river
A 在 B 的对面 A is on the opposite side of B A is opposite B
A 在 B 东部的边界上(A 在 B 外部) A is on the eastern border of B
A 在 B 东部边缘上 (A 在 B 内部) A is on/ along the eastern edge of B
2. “变化”词汇 原有事物可说成: The original/previous/former garden
原有事物尺寸上变大/变小: The size of the library has been enlarged/extended/halved/reduced by half
原有事物在数量上增多或减少: The number of homes has increased/risen/grown/reduced /decreased/dropped/fallen/doubled/ tripled/ quadrupled to 500.
原有事物没了: The farms completely disappeared/were removed. 原有事物被改为: A becomes B A is transformed/reconstructed/redeveloped/converted/changed/turned over to/ into B A is replaced /substituted by B = A gives way to B
图形新添事物 A newly-built road A new car park was built/established/set up/constructed/completed and opened in the middle of B A new IT centre has been added to the library The year 2000 saw two additions to the land: a pond in the northern part and a vegetable garden on the opposite side. 精彩句子 1. Between them, there is a restaurant in the north and a central reception block, which is surrounded by a vehicle track.
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