剑桥雅思Test 2全面解析-写作（Task 1）

题目解析

y 题目图表为拥有三种类别的柱状图，展示了英国自 1995 至 2002 年的电话拨打时间情

况；

y 图标中研究对象分别为：

1. Local – fixed line 本地固定电话；

2. National and international – fixed line 国内及国际固定电话；

3. Mobiles (all calls) 移动电话；

y 图中横坐标为调查年份，纵坐标为各种形式电话拨打的时间长度；

写作思路

多类别的柱状图的写法较为多样，在本题写作中，我们需要注意即要描述出三种不同形

式的电话拨打时间随年份的变化趋势，又要体现出三种不同的电话拨打时间之间的对比关系。

在本题中，变化趋势和对比教比较明显，因此难度不大。

范文分析

以下范文是剑 9 中给出的考官官方高分范文，全文及具体解析如下：

The chart shows the time spent by UK residents on different types of telephone 

calls between 1995 and 2002.

第一段：转述题目。

Local fixed line calls were the highest throughout the period, rising from 72 billion

minutes in 1995 to just under 90 billion in 1998. After peaking at 90 billion the

following year, these calls had fallen back to the 1995 figure by 2002.

第二段：如在写作思路中所说，在具体描述柱状图时，我们需要体现出变化及对比两个点。

作者在本段中先表明 local fixed calls 是全部时期总量最大的拨打形式，是为对比。接下来

所写的 local fixed calls 根据时间的走势，这种描写方法与曲线图的描写方法非常相似，可

以相互借鉴。

National and international fixed line calls grew steadily from 38 to 61 billion at the

end of the period in question, though the growth slowed over the last two years.

第三段：该段中主要描写了 national and international fixed line calls 的变化情况，指出

其缓慢上升的过程，并给出了具体数值。

There was a dramatic increase in mobile calls from 2 billion to 46 billion minutes.

This rise was particularly noticeable between 1999 and 2002, during which time the

use of mobile phones tripled. 

第四段：该段中作者除了描述 mobile calls 在给出时间内激增的变化趋势外，还着重强调

了其变化最为明显的区间，体现了图表细节。

To sum up, although local fixed line calls were still the most popular in 2002, the

gap between the three categories had narrowed considerably over the second half

of the period in question.

第五段：最后一段除重申第二段观点外，还对着给出了三种不同电话拨打方式时长差距缩小

的特点。

柱状图必备句式

柱状图所用句型与曲线图句型一致，详细请参见 TEST 4 Writing Task 1 中所给出的曲线图

必备句式。

精彩句式

1. After peaking at 90 billion the following year, these calls had fallen back to the

1995 figure by 2002.

2. National and international fixed line calls grew steadily from 38 to 61 billion at

the end of the period in question, though the growth slowed over the last two

years. 

3. This rise was particularly noticeable between 1999 and 2002, during which time

the use of mobile phones tripled. 

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