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剑桥雅思Test 4全面解析-写作(Task 2)

题目解析

y Every year several languages die out. Some people think that this is not

important because life will be much easier if there are fewer languages in the

world.

每年都会有数种语言消亡。有的人认为这并不重要因为(他们认为)假如世界上的语言

种类减少会让生活更加容易。

y 题目为 Agree/Disagree 题型;

y 题目内容包含两个因素:语言和生活;

写作思路

Agree:若同意题目观点,认为语言的减少确实有利于生活的简单化,则需找到支持的理由。

可选的如:

1. 减少人们学习语言的时间;

2. 扫清使用不同语言的人之间的语言障碍;

3. 让交流更准确和高效;

Disagree:若反对题目观点,则需证明语言种类的减少会对生活造成不好的影响,可选的

角度有:

1. 语言消亡导致文化消亡; 

2. 语言消亡影响多样性进而影响创新;

3. 语言消亡导致历史真相无法破解;

范文分析

剑 9 中给出的范文分数仅 4 分,不具备参考价值。因此提供天道培训老师原创范文一篇,

供同学们借鉴。

Overall, I disagree with this opinion that fewer languages will make life much easier

for people. It is true that the extinction of some languages will save some people

the trouble of learning new languages to break communication barriers, but we are

also suffering from irreversible loss of cultural treasures.

第一段:提出反对的观点,简单给出语言种类减少可能会带来好处—减少语言障碍,提出

语言种类减少会导致不可逆的文化上的损失。

Language is much more than a communication tool. A language represents a

unique cultural identity and contains collective wisdom and consciousness. Many

are proud of who they are because of the language they speak. French people, for

example, are well-known to be very proud of their language. When the Germans

occupied France during WWII and forced students to speak German in school,

many French teachers and students refused to obey the order, insisting reading and

writing in French. The famous novel The Last Lesson by Alphonse Daudet told such 

a story. From this story and its historical background, it’s not hard to see that the

death of a language is sometimes as serious as the destruction of a unique cultural

or national identity, which may wipe out a people’s collective memory, sense of

honor and respect. Such cases are not uncommon in human history. While we feel

indifferent towards the death of other languages, we may as well think about what

would happen to ourselves if our own language is forgotten by the world.

第二段:指出语言不单单是交流沟通的工具,同时还代表着独特的文化和民族智慧。为了更

好的阐述语言的文化特性,作者给出了法国人以语言为傲的事例。本段中最后一句论述很精

彩:当我们对其他语言的消失无动于衷的时候,或许可以设想假如我们自己的语言面临消亡

时候的场景。

In an increasingly globalized world, English has become so dominant in all areas

that many local languages face the danger of dying out. In this way, one will not be

able to decipher the precious documents preserved in these languages any more, a

huge loss to our future generations. Eventually, we will regret sacrificing the cultural

value contained in these languages for the convenience of communication.

第三段:作者给出了另一个语言消亡的恶果,即许多宝贵的文案无法被破解,后代们将无法

知晓这些文化价值。

In summary, we need to learn to preserve languages that are dying out and respect 

their unique cultural value. It’s shortsighted to sacrifice linguistic diversity and

cultural identity just because we spend more time learning foreign tongues.

第四段:重申文化与语言的紧密连接,抨击为了节约时间去减少语言多样性乃目光短浅。

精彩句式

1. It is true that the extinction of some languages will save some people the

trouble of learning new languages to break communication barriers, but we

are also suffering from irreversible loss of cultural treasures.

2. From this story and its historical background, it’s not hard to see that the

death of a language is sometimes as serious as the destruction of a unique

cultural or national identity, which may wipe out a people’s collective

memory, sense of honor and respect.

3. While we feel indifferent towards the death of other languages, we may as

well think about what would happen to ourselves if our own language is

forgotten by the world.

4. Eventually, we will regret sacrificing the cultural value contained in these

languages for the convenience of communication. 

类似真题

1. What are the reasons for losing a variety of languages and cultures?

Give some solutions to solve the problem.

2. The advantages brought about the spread of English as a global language will

outweigh the disadvantages.

Do you agree or disagree with this opinion? 2005.4.6

3. When you learn a language, you should also learn the cultures and lifestyles of

this country.

To what extent do you agree or disagree? 2006.8.12 

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